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Come to the Dark Side - the wolves are hotter over here
Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 518 Karma: 17 |  | Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Thread Started on Mar 12, 2008, 8:39pm » | |
OK, Who ever is wishing to participate here please post. I will take four at a time. This isn't going to be a grammar Nazi course, mostly punctuation and proper word usage and expanding your vocabulary. ^.^
1: Airyna 2: akitawolf 3: Richy
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dannggg, I miss this place ;_;
Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 391 Location: Ohioness Karma: 10 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #1 on Mar 12, 2008, 8:44pm » | |
I want to do it!
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Joined: Dec 2007 Posts: 402 Location: On the Back of a Horse Karma: 7 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #2 on Mar 12, 2008, 8:44pm » | |
I would like to join.
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Joined: Dec 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 350 Location: Miami Karma: 9 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #3 on Mar 14, 2008, 4:17pm » | |
May I join?
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Come to the Dark Side - the wolves are hotter over here
Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 518 Karma: 17 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #4 on Mar 20, 2008, 12:21pm » | |
yep, I'll start classes Monday! Woo spring break
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Come to the Dark Side - the wolves are hotter over here
Joined: Jun 2007 Gender: Female  Posts: 518 Karma: 17 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #5 on Mar 28, 2008, 6:29pm » | |
Ok late class start! Been very busy. x.o. Ok I want you all to post something as you normally would. And I will edit it. This will be the punctuation area of the class, I will give you a post to RP off of.
Void traipsed around the dark battlefield, watching, waiting as the sun dipped lower and lower to the horizon. Spirits of long dead wolves also milled around, waiting for the barrier of light to fall and release them onto the earth once more. Viper sneered as he two waited, but unlike them he could leave anytime, he was living, but he chose to exit when it would be the most beneficial to him, when his powers could be stronger, influenced by the everlasting moon.
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dannggg, I miss this place ;_;
Joined: Feb 2008 Gender: Female  Posts: 391 Location: Ohioness Karma: 10 |  | Re: Come one come all, Improve your grammar! ect.. « Reply #6 on Apr 5, 2008, 4:30pm » | |
Channing watched each front paw lead him into this death-filled land, each of them moving to a specific rhythm it seemed. The land gave him a chill down his darkened spine, a chill in which he did not mind. Yet he became weary of his environment. His ink-like paws stopped at the intuition of another wolf's presence. The silver-lined head he possessed lifted, his eyes piercing, showing no fear. His tail only lay gently behind him, not letting dominance complete his figure.
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+Tadewi:F:N:Richy+ +Moonraiser:F:N:Single+ +Channing:M:N:Single+ +Aclairé:F:?:Pup+
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